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Tuesday, August 27, 2019

fun run

As we were walking down the train, The wind was blowing in my face. As we were walking off the train. We then hooped on the train and then we got to the UK rugby field and the houses did there chants. As I was lining up I was nervous because I didn't want to come last. as I started my run I herd everyone was cheering for me. I could also see a lot of cows, as I was finishing the race came second.


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6 comments:

  1. Oshen ShelfordMarch 3, 2020 at 12:07 PM

    Hi Herbert, my name is Oshen I come to your school.
    Your blog looks like is it amazing, I have read it it sounds good and it makes sence. Maybe when your ready you can check my blog out.
    https://kpsoshens.blogspot.com

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    1. Whaea DanaMarch 3, 2020 at 10:09 PM

      Hi Oshen, remember when you write comments you need to show you have read and understood the blog. e.g. Congratulations for coming 2nd Herbert, that is an awesome placing when you thought you were going to come last. I liked that you have used some descriptive language too.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 13, 2020 at 12:29 PM

    Kia ora Herbert it’s Reminis from Paihia school I really like your fun run I was watching the race with Auntie Dos Dos. I enjoyed reading your post about the fun run, I had fun watching the race. Did you have fun running there

    Was it fun at the fun run?

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  3. AnonymousOctober 13, 2020 at 1:53 PM

    Kia ora Herbet my name is Shay, I am a year 7 student from Paihia School I really liked reading your blog post about the Fun Run because i've never done a fun run before that’s why I got interested. The fun run sounded really fun i’ve only been on a train three times and one of them was the train that you were on.

    Did you enjoy the fun run?

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  4. AnonymousOctober 14, 2020 at 12:09 PM

    Hi Herbert, my name is Jade I am a year six student from Paihia School. I like your post about the fun run. I like it because it was interesting and I was very interested in your post because you put in detail. We went to cross-country also. Did you have fun?


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  5. AnonymousOctober 15, 2020 at 10:28 AM

    Kia ora Herbert my name is Calais, I’m a year 7 student that goes to Paihia School. I like the photo that you put on your blog post because now I know what the train looks like inside the carriage.I bet it would be fun to go on a train because the cold wind blows in your face when you open the window .

    Was the train going fast or slow?

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