Something I found easy was writing my words and sometimes I used google dictionary to help me with words.
My next steps are sharing my all about me with other schools so they know what I learn and what I do.
Wednesday, March 28, 2018
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Hey there Herbet, my name is Parwin and I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model school. I really like your presentation that you made about yourself because it was vibrant the blue writing really stood out. Maybe next time you could check your writing again because at the end it says 'Or about me' but I think you were meant to say, 'All about me instead'. I don't know what you meant by that, but great job!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Herbert! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way that you have added in your goals at the bottom of the presentation. It give us information of what you are trying to achieve.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my first blog post when I did my 'all about me' poem. I think that you should use some different words than just 'and then I...' or 'and I also...' maybe you could use something like 'I am enthusiastic about...' or some other words that you could think of.
Awesome work!
Mia
Hello Herbert! My name is louis from Yaldhurst model school. I liked it how you put that phont into your writing (is it faster one?). It brought me back to when I did a profile about me. next time you could use different word than AND. I would like to see your next blog post,
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Louis.